Sachin, can you make sure that you're not over complicating the essay? As it's a Gauntlett theory, it would be helpful to refer to his theory in more depth. Ponty's theory was about having am embodied creative experience - such as updating our profiles, etc. Have you answered the question, it doesn't seem so in places! Keep trying hard - analysis is excellent!!
Sachin, can you make sure that you're not over complicating the essay? As it's a Gauntlett theory, it would be helpful to refer to his theory in more depth. Ponty's theory was about having am embodied creative experience - such as updating our profiles, etc. Have you answered the question, it doesn't seem so in places! Keep trying hard - analysis is excellent!!
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